2025-12-29
5 min read
How to write a winning envelope message (examples that work)
In sealed bids, your message and profile matter. Here are short examples sellers trust — and what to avoid.
In sealed bids, sellers don’t just choose a number — they choose a person. Your message should remove friction and signal you’ll complete smoothly.
Your message has ONE job
- Confirm you can pay promptly.
- Give a clear collection/delivery plan.
- Stay calm and brief.
The simplest template (copy, then edit)
“Hi — I can pay [when] if chosen. I can [collect/delivery plan]. Thanks — easy transaction.”
Good messages (copy/paste style)
Local collection
“Hi — I can pay immediately if chosen. I’m local and can collect Saturday morning (11am) or Sunday afternoon. No fuss.”
Needs delivery
“Hi — happy to pay straight away. I’d need delivery; I’m flexible on dates and can be in most evenings. Thanks.”
Collector vibe
“Hi — I collect these and will look after it. Can pay immediately; can collect within 48 hours. Easy transaction.”
What to avoid (seller red flags)
- Vague: “can collect anytime” (sounds flaky).
- Pressure: “I need it today!!!” (reads like trouble).
- Contact details: don’t drop phone/email in messages.
- Long essays: sellers skim; keep it tight.
Next step
If you want to understand why this works, read why sealed bids work and how sellers choose a winner.
FAQ
How long should my message be?
Short. Two to four sentences is ideal: payment timing + plan + calm tone.
Should I share phone/email?
No. Keep contact details on-platform to reduce scams and protect privacy.
Do I need to be the highest bid to win?
Not always. Reliability and clear logistics often win when offers are close.
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